Natalie Patton > Recent Status Updates

Feels too long, writing is the same. I was more engaged at the start with this than with the last one

Reading it again, can’t remember my page lol

It’s really picking up, hard to put down. Nearly into climax town!

Got real dark real quick

Pretty good so far, tad bit slow

Hiatus for now

Hiatus

On hiatus, gonna restart it

Already seems better than book 1 holy crap

Getting better, climax town. Dialogue is still meh

Book on pause: reading another one rn

Plot is still interesting, we’re getting to the climax yay! The writing is still hard to read. It’s bad. I think the author is trying to be extremely inclusive and funny, but it’s not working. Also Nausicaä is an inconsistent character which I am not a fan of. Characters need to be consistent!

World development right now

Book on pause:

I’m reading other books right now.

Plot seems interesting, a bit slow right now.

Book on pause:

I’m reading other ones first. This one hasn’t pulled me in too much, the dialogue is a lil cringy

It’s a bit slow but it seems like it’s starting to get good

The plot sounds so good, but the writing is not the greatest right now

Hi :)