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Wording and sentence choice is simple so it easy to read. But on the other side it reads like it’s someone’s diary - a bunch of memories. People say it’s dark, but I’m not sure about that for now.

I can relate to the protagonist of the story, her actions, theirs and feelings are familiar to me. Author picked emotional detailed that say a lot without saying it. But most of the scenes feel abrupt. I wanted to see more but it jumped to a next scene.

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