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I wish i could just carve out all the nonsense and just get the genuinly interesting well crafted story underneath. Because its there.

Second Story done!
I like it less than the first, but still really fun. The writing style so far is very distinct /compliment

I wish Vin's characterisation was consistent.

First Story finished :)
Really really interesting, I liked it a lot

End of Part 2
Fantastic Action Scene, I gotta hand it to him
I no longer Trust [Spoilers] Even A Little Bit.

Starting my master thesis research✨️✨️

"This is so liberating to come into a store and talk about this stuff!" one female shopper remarked.
Another noted, "I get braver every time I come in here. The first time, I looked over my shoulder, afraid that someone I know would see me. The second time, I blushed when the salesperson explained how things worked. This time, I parked illegally and strutted right in!"

god the unreflected misogynie. Yay girl as a main character. Except the writer periodically forgets how to writer her in favour of really flat clichés. Vin is introduced as REALLY clever why is she somtimes stupid. SHE WOULD KNOW THIS. Also hate when i can clock a romantic subplot from a mile away. Very excited for that (/sarc) Its! fine! Its fine.

mhm... okay.

Part 1 done and I was feeling good and then the first chapter of Part 2 is maybe the worst so far? idk its not like Actually Bad but its got a really weird tone to it. feels a bit like a filler, both too full of exposition and stretched to thin to cover it well.

VIN IS MY GIRL AND THEY ALL NEED TO LEAVE HER ALONE SHE'S DOING HER BEST. Also <3 The Creature <3 And What A Creature It Is <3 <3

Good Chapter :) very fun :)

Little Action Interlude. Some Spiderman ass action, which is a bonus. Also more of my new segment "Lets stop calling the girl ""paranoid"" for taking basic measures to protect hersel."

okay books started. Plot has been Set Up
Characters have met. Lets see how it goes. Fuck Breeze eternally, consent-violating, condescending Piece of Shit

I am starting to see where this is going...
ALSO met the first character i just like