This is so. Slow. Paced. I'll probably finish it but we do not need this much dialogue. For example:
"OH for heavens sake just tell me the answer!"
"You dont want to know"
"Yes I do!"
"Well, I suppose we could give him half of the answer"
"Yes just half." They agreed, because they agreed most of the time, but not always.
"The answer will upset you."
"That's isn't an answer!"
STOP DRAGGING. IM DYING HERE
— Nov 07, 2025 12:29PM
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