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The timelines are too much, it’s a weak attempt to leave a cliffhanger and jump to random persons on “last Wednesday” then to a different character “last Monday” , the flow is non existent it doesn’t work for the buildup…. Did I mention the man character is the possibly the dumbest person in the world of fiction …this is hard

It’s a struggle , very frustrating in that non of the characters are logical and the intent is just to pile on the most illogical response to a situation to create drama , I get it that is that point, however, it’s just like a terrible attempt at a reality tv show … I never DNC books but this has me seriously contemplating wasting my time.