Did anyone edit this book?
When Lira and Tavish are talking through the bond it is in italics, but there are parts that are clearly descriptions that are STILL in the italics, making it make no sense. For example, page 116:
“Finnian. They brought him back. Tavish didn’t sound happy. He’s hurt, but don’t come back”Clearly “Tavish didn’t sound happy” isn’t dialogue. This has happened multiple times!
— Nov 01, 2026 05:05PM
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