Allyson Mondo > Recent Status Updates

Trying hard not to drop it… I like the writing (despite it being unnecessarily confusing at times). It’s the only thing that keeps me reading…

This is an alt earth, clearly… but why so many races in a place that historically only had whites? Is the race and specific culture a person comes from more important than anything else? Every character screams that statement… it undermines the whole story for me… they have personalities but above all else they have their race and birthplace…

A lot of repeating the same concepts in many words… this is useful for learning (or remembering concepts), but it feels like a waste of my time when it’s things I know & understand well. Of course, extra repetition isn’t particularly harmful. If I was skipping around more, it’d probably be more time-efficient, but I don’t like skipping.

Going through it slowly…

Not much interesting info in the beginning, gets a little better later on. Useful, but frustratingly repetitive if you already know some stuff. It may still add some interesting unknown details/examples here and there, though.