i’m all for supporting small authors, and i know i’m only 5 chapters in, but respectfully, i really don’t like the writing style. the pacing is really slow (ex: 3 pages could be 1 since there’s a lot of unnecessary detail) and fmc already seems weak and whiny (i understand there is room for character growth but i wish she was competent from the beginning). hopefully it will get better as i read ❤️🩹
— Jun 30, 2026 12:43AM
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