I just finished The Dreamer and the Deceiver (The Last Light Book 1). The story is good, the writing is deplorable. It appears he as a thesaurus but not a dictionary. Most sentences are long, running on and on. Too many adjectives as if he is only looking for word count. With a good editor this could be a great book. Just my opinion.
— Mar 17, 2015 09:29AM
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