GARY WILLIS > Recent Status Updates

I hope we are finally going to stay more action heavy from here on. There has been just enough moments to keep me interested but then reverts back to describing their fears and love.

Didn't realize this was going to be splatterpunk. Gore has never bothered me before but the sexual torture here is getting to me. I want to see how the story plays out but like the nanny, I hope we don't have to play will the dolls much more.

Not for sure about the dual narrative. First couple examples it starts out as the same part being told twice but then seems to split off, but I'm not sure.

Not for sure where the 3 writing styles (script, past & present) are leading. Thought we were to find out that there was no script and the lead was just being bullied. Doesn't seem to be that way now. I hope it isn't just a writer showing off and doing a style for no reason.