Stephanie Anderson > Recent Status Updates

I am so shocked with how bad the writing for this is. The story has potential but too many mistakes the flow of the story and the amount of irrelevant characters going on is terrible. I’m angry reading the scene with the doors. This is group of women in their mid to late twenties and they acting like this is so fake. Wow bad

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The way that the eternal flame leaders hate Helena even with all the good she has done hurts me. I don’t understand how Elaine isn’t treated the same way since she is also a ‘healer’ that means she is also a vivimancer too right.
This story is taking me around all the emotions right now

I want to cry for Helena. She has been left for dead as a flyaway that they use for their own good.

Both sides of the war seem to be filled with bad people. The eternal flame do not trust Helena because of her power but will use and abuse it and her for their own gain and advancement in the war. I am glad that some of these people will die in the future as they are not to my liking at all. Crowther, Matias and Ilva are stinking older people who will stop at nothing to win and they have no true compassion

The relationship between Helena and ferren are being explored and you can see that he already has thoughts of her for years now it’s time to find out why

So far so good. I understand and feel the undercurrents of the Harry Potter fanfic but I’m enjoying

I can’t help but compare her to Aelin. Violet is very much arisk taker with everyone else having to suffer for her never thinking things thru and talking to others to understand more.

When I say that Violet is dumb I mean that at this part of the book she reveals things not meant for her to say and is upset that the people she speaks too are not mad at her for keeping a secret. It’s because it’s not your secret to tell!!! And they understand that. You have no right to risk others for your guilty conscience but do t go the whole way to risk your family. She is so selfish