Kate R > Recent Status Updates

This story was fun, but I felt the editing was lacking. For instance, in the first chapter, we find out that the main character has been to Willow’s house the last three years for New Year’s Eve, and then later we hear they’ve known each other for one year. The main character has a lot of potential, and the scenery was great.

The first two thirds were dark but compelling. The last third felt fake.