Ai ai ai, not a good start. We are immediately dumped into this world where the FMC is already obsessed with the MMC. The language feels as if the reader should care and there are high stakes, but we don't get any information on why we should. Like, please tell us first who you are and what is going on, so we all start on the same page?
— Sep 27, 2026 07:49AM
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