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i’m fucking with it so far, love a good collection of short stories

if Vanna dies i will kms

me likey.. please let them survive and get out at least. idk who i’d be ok with dying but someone’s gonna

bro i’m SCAREDDDDUH

fw it so far.. ooo underwater

yeah ngl i genuinely think i didn’t like part one of the book because ben was annoying as hell. but like i kinda am invested and fw it since part two

“felt a hard callous shell forming around him” yeah he’s just becoming crab. sounds more like crab too

ok ben is a bit more like. also ferona? Pherona? idk i love her that’s my goat

idk ben kinda irks me. don’t like him. appreciate crab

idk i still feel like Wren is actually just Holden

def a more fantastical turn. eldritch horrors and whatnot. wonder if it can actually be explained by the cult

it’s reminding me of the thickety that one witchy series i read as a kid. like with the parallel world where people are stuck. liking it so far

yeah we getting spooky

we only halfway and they’ve been trying to leave for the past 3 chapters i fear we r in for a ride

hmmm okay okay interesting enough.. some kind of time anomaly happeninggg..?

no woman in her early 30s is using the word “lowkey” unironically CMONN (“lowkey freaked me out”)

my name is edwin. i made the mimic

bea girl genuinely what the fuck.

bea u lowkey gotta fuck off. kinda everyone gotta except agnes and glenn. like bea girl ur pissing me off treat your daughter with respect she’s allowed to be mad at you for abandoning her for like a year??

Carl.. carl? 😼 carl…. 🙁

bea girl i understand ur going thru a lot but caroline died why are we mad about people feeling compassion for someone they’ve been traveling with this whole time. chill.

lesbianssss. for sure.

okayyy i’m really liking the flow now. this chapter (5) and the way it talked about her mothers cancer was beautiful, and though she’s cold about it she describes it too like,, beautifully to not feel a sort of attachment to her mother, or at least what she taught her.
dorothy and emma should date..

the writing style is starting to make more sense to me, yay! it flows better now

okay, i’m starting to really fuck with the writing because it fits the character. her self-important prose and language just reminds me of patrick bateman, except she’s not insecure and she genuinely believes she’s the best thing since sliced bread. i do like it.

now why are we mentioning the breast arc of a 15 year old girl..

i can TELL the author studied british literature like she said in her little biography. some of these descriptions seem wordy and redundant, but i kinda like it.

narrative-wise, the mention of sex and genitalia seem to play as a counterpart to the idea of a male serial killer who sexualizes everything. i like this opposing feminist version.

interesting so far, language is descriptive and interesting. romances aren’t really my thing so the “oh i hate this dress he gave me” and pompous attitude of the fae guy seems very cliche. however i do think it can get better.