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The main character is supposed to be blind, yet the author constantly forgets that with lines like “I look at Yas, who looks at Sage, who looks at me,” and “The place looks like a kindergartener drew it and then a genie brought it to life … Everything is built just sloppily enough that I really start to convince myself that it was in fact designed in crayon.” She isn’t supposed to be able to see anything

DNF at 16%. Really hard to follow and just bad writing.

Paused at 37%. Essentially a Harry Styles fanfic which I didn’t necessarily mind, but I knew right away what the conflicts were going to be and as soon as the first one hit, I just didn’t feel like continuing on through it.

So far (55%) I don’t like this much at all. Will is supremely awful and Leo has zero self respect. His behavior is beyond cringeworthy and the way he describes how Will acts and treats him makes him seem terribly unlikeable. I have adored the other books in this series so I’m going to try to finish this one.