I've been wanting to read this book for months now because the cover and premise tickle me so, but after just 20 pages, I'm becoming hesitant...
The prologue feels a little like the author just showed her hand, and the first chapter feels like a barely disguised info dump that falls into the traps most inexperienced writer fall into with the MC's morning routine... Still, I'm not ready to give up on it just yet ^_^
— Nov 18, 2019 06:31PM
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