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Great storyline but this book is in need of a complete editing due to inconsistencies and cohesiveness. One minute she's wearing only a shirt but the next fully clothed. Also, one chapter ends with them all sitting in front of the fire and the next we're told the bed was shredded due to sex when it was never mentioned.

This is the 5th book of the Astoria series and I have to say, I'm not really enjoying it like the others. For it to be the conclusion I'm not impressed. The relationship is more lust based than actual romantic, heartfelt feelings.

This is a quote directly from the book.

“You’ll get more, greedy girl. But there’s no way I’m coming in that beautiful pouty mouth of yours our first time. I’m gonna come inside your pussy. Feel you explode around my cock. Then we’ll sleep, and when we wake up, I’m gonna eat you out, watch you orgasm up close and all over my face . . . then maybe I’ll let you drink my load.”

This doesn't sound like the same author.

Just a servant!! I hate it when she speaks like that to Colin as if being a servant was beneath her. Also, she is a down right snob and needs put in her place.

At this point in the book, I am not liking the Heroine, at all. Why? She is childish and very entitled and speaks incessantly. I thought, at first, she was a courageous woman but now, I'm beginning to think she is a brat throwing a tantrum and is angry because her dad left her horse to her brother.

No idea how to bridal and harness a horse even though she has been around horses and they breed horses? This is a little hard to believe.

I understand the need to have drama in a book, but sometimes, less is more. Just as the two main characters reunite, they are fighting again and they part in anger.

Its 4am and I can't stop reading because its so good!!!

I really enjoy the hero in this book; he's kind hearted,compassionate when he could be harsh and has a heart for animals. However, I m not a big fan of the Heroine due to her childish behavior and her cruelty towards the Captain in regards to his dead wife. One minute she is caring the next she's raving lunatic with no compassion.

Lachlan is such an ass!! He finds Sophia in a club employee lounge with a MN who basically was attempting to date rape her and after saving her takes her against a wall for her first time. He didn't even care if he hurt her.

When another tear rolls down my cheek, Lochlan says, “Cry all you want, princess, but I’m not stopping until my cum is dripping down your thighs.”

I'm nearly done with this book

Oh come on! Sophie tells her step mother, a night before her wedding, ahe wants to lose her virginity to a stranger and she's okay with that? "Just be very careful." WTF! Ugh I'm not sure how I feel about this book at the moment.

I understand Sofie is young but to be 18 and not knowing the basics about sex is a little unbelievable; the girl, supposedly did not k ow what protection was! I have no idea what the author was thinking making her so ridiculously childish. This isn't looking good for my future reading.

So far, the book is real well written with a great plot. The spice scenes are really hot!

Story is becoming a little boring as they flee Paris after stealing a painting; the action is being drawn out and not to my liking.

Seven and Aurora's relationship reminds me of Harley Quade and The Joker. Crazy lunatics.

Very well written and easy to understand; though there are a few mistakes, it doesn't distract from the story.

So far, this book is filled with so many mistakes; grammatical errors on nearly every page along with Inconsistency and poor editing. One moment, its been 5 years since she met the brothers and the next chapter, its 3 years. One page the brother has blue eyes, and then suddenly, they are green? And the storyline is horrible as well. Who unprotected sex with 2 strangers? 😝