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it's a good thing the covers got updated bc I would nottttt open this book otherwise

where the fuck did that romance come from

I need this to be over

Doing a very bad job at explaining WHY society is the way it is, specifically with the pressure on Alexander. genuinely wondering why you have to have a partner or uh. a slave. in order to run a company like where did this become mandatory for CEOs in this society and why are they socially interchangable??

it's getting better

he fell ASLEEP are you KIDDING ME

I would rather have characters pull up to an inn and have three beds available than laying in the same bed discussing wool business name the book fucking Woolcrossed at this point

sticking your fingers in your swordsman's mouth mid practice........ questionable foreplay but it's not wool politics so it's an improvement

the fantasy politics and business deals are just about the biggest fucking drag and I'm holding out hope that the gay yearning will conquer all

"I don't want to impregnate you" is one of the worst mid-coitus sentences I've ever seen in a sex scene :(

don't get attached to ANYBODY what the fuck

you're telling me they healed a compound fracture??? there has not been enough world building about the human healing in this world for me to buy that

not the dog bro

have to admit I was intrigued by the premise but the book itself so far has me repeatedly checking the progress to see how much longer I have left 🫣

first hundred plus pages were pretty ass but it's getting more interesting

I love seeing stoic characters have a horrible, terrible, no good very bad time in a book.

this has just hurt my feelings

This book has me STRESSIN

just had to close it and step away at the second hand embarrassment of this girl having the fuckin audacity to weigh in on battle strategy. I'm certain it's going to be correct for the plot BUT COME ON.

repressed Knight taught about Christmas trees by his mortal enemy the prankster. more at 11

you can walk across the entire kingdom in one hour???

Teris is apparently also the king's name

3 whole pages in and I've managed to become confused between the main character and the country because "The cloth shirt beneath Teris's delicately etched and carved armor stuck to the small of his back", and Teris is the country...

I got bored of straight characters for a bit there but I'm tryna finish it 😔