Issue 7 is a nice little story
The excessive narration works for Jessica who is an anxious overthinker but I think for Simon he’d be more effective if he had less dialogue. I get why you wouldn’t want to do that since they’re co-leads. This book also writes Simon’s struggles and culture well but I want him to have some other personality traits or interests to round him out. Liked his anxiety over his mom.
— Jun 26, 2026 08:09PM
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