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I did not realise the “technically not incest” jokes from bookclub actually held a decent amount of weight to them. I honestly just thought it was because of the general “I love hugs from my handsome step bro” vibes but it is in fact more than that. Hoping to finish this book this week and although it is entertaining I’m not sure I’ll continue the series.

Sorry lots of updates for this one (I’m not sure if it’s because I have book club brain so I need to jot down thoughts). The following line is cringe and definitely could have been written better

“…treading along mosaic tile until we reach a dark-red floor.
I gasp. It’s red because it’s a sea of blood.”

I can’t remember if I had this issue with the first book but I’m struggling to remember who is who and trying to figure out whose point of view I’m following is a little confusing.

No way to write this without spoiling just a little bit so MINOR SPOILER WARNING I GUESS



but I’m more angry they survived and the Zabears didn’t. It’s a mum and her cubs you assholes. Sure survival and all that but damn.

4 chapters and 20 named characters is too much please. No more characters, actually less characters please

Putting this book on hold for a while because it has genuinely put me in a reading slump with how unenjoyable it is to read. The idea has potential, however there are so many rookie writing errors that I don’t really understand what’s going on any more.

Main feeling so far is disappointed. The idea has potential but there are a few things really letting it down.