Yeah. That revelation and subsequent emotional beat were unearned. I know I sound critical of this one, but it's because everything wrong with this is SO easily fixable. Have the leads meet sooner, have Melanie's suspicious grow more gradually, have her do some ACTUAL sleuthing, set up the more mundane emotional conflicts sooner... Everything that moves this story forward is incredibly delayed and then abrupt
— Sep 02, 2026 11:35AM
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