The concept is cute and the character types are original, the Fruit Bat Vampire eats fruit not blood, cute and clever! However, I feel like there is a lot of repetition, lots of "because of course he does" and many duplicated descriptions, like the cologne surely is something more than just woodsy and expensive. They current dynamic between the main characters is very one note too.
— Nov 11, 2025 07:11PM
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