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I think my conflict in my story would be character vs Society as well as character vs character. Because it is a well known fact that their city of St Petersburg is experiencing a famine & people or the characters must survive starvation through manatary gain. But also character vs character because multiple interacts where a character shares their world views as well as their prespective on their world.

Its a realistic psychological thriller and fiction and is designed for young intellectual minds, as well as people drawn into western philosophies like nihilism and utilitarianism as it relates back to the back and its contents.

(I would rate myself either a 2.5 or 3 in the interested scale) since I haven't been able to really read my book due to the schedule changes. I could also always take the book home and really see if I like it so far but I have for the last 40 or so pages.

He runs into a self deperivative drunkard.

My story takes place in St. Petersburg during a hot July summer in the 1860's.

..."but she is a woman of a noble heart, full of sentiments, refined by education." (page 17)- Dostoevsky

I predicted the main character will wind up killing someone not just anyone the little old lady that "guards" his Garret or his apartment which was given to him by her. Fyodor Dostoevsky page 13

"Although disappointed that the French revolution was (overshadowed by the horrors of the Reign of Terror and the egomania of Emperor Bonaparte), intellectuals of the day lauded his ideals and were fascinated by the idea of radical reformation and perfecting the human condition." Page 4 Fyodor Dostoevsky

"One...of those chimps... charged me." Eliot Schrefer page 81

I identified Gabon early 20th century or late 19th more so it takes place in a jungle that is said to be bigger than France when combined with the urban and rural.

My first and only question for the author would be "Do the animals more so the chimpanzees understand the characters and or their actions?" I ask this because in the text it can support that the chimp may be smarter than they first realized.

The Genre of my book is a survival adventure with the main topic being about the preservation of animals.

Luc and the Odd Arab are still the protagonists and my favorite. For starters Luc reminds me of a younger me wanting anything to get my hands on something I wanted. But the Arab in the story is a complete character one who values scientific research but also the environment and the native species and inhabitants.

there was probably waterfalls within the "steaming" greenery. Page 36

I read 5 pages

My favorite character so far would either be Luc the main character or the Odd Arab that saved Luc from Monsieur Tatagani the tax collector that use his family's hospital bills to control his debt along with feeding him and charging him. He's around the age of 10