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i'm sick of these nature metaphors

i don't know if the writing's improved or i don't notice as much now the plot has picked up. i love the cheesy one-liners too!!!!

Something about the writing is irking me. I think it's too repetitive - unsure if it's the dual POV going over the same stuff we've already seen but in recollection, but I think phrases are just repeated frequently too close together. Feel like this is gonna be one of those that could easily cut a quarter of the pages and lose nothing

eugh i love it when they fight

i love these characters and this story

Sylvia's internal monologue is hilarious

I love the way Tamsyn Muir writes - so simple yet expressive and funny and complex. You can really live in the scenes