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Story line is great but the writing style doesn’t vibe with me. Some lines are too cheesy and there are lines that over explains certain scenes

This book is full of smutt. I don’t even count this as a romance book. Again, the movie is still better than the book. No story, no “kilig”. And wtf is that line where he saw the mouth of Solene’s daughter????? Isn’t it so pedo??? Omg what if the author is a groomer? Lol