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SUMMARY: The story mainly focuses on rescuing Nina, who is trapped in a volcanic tube under the moon base. Other important characters include Dashille, Chang and Violet. So far, the story is about the people on the moon base who tell other people from earth that the moon base is very good, when it isn’t. The main problem is trying to find Nina and trying to save her.

SETTING: The setting is in the future on a moonbase. When describing where the story takes place it says, “the story takes place on a moonbase in a mdv” (p.1). This setting impacts the story because there on the moon in a base so there a lot of people in the base so lack of space,air, and fresh food also they have to deal with unexpected problems.

PREDICTION: I predict that the sun will die. In the story says Zan to Dashial , “I need to tell you something. I think the sun i dying because there is a substance like pathogen that is affecting the sun in a weird way” (247 ). This prediction makes sense because Zan hints that something bad is happening, and now the sun is being affected. I think that this is linked to something.

ANTAGONIST: The antagonist in this story is Patton. The text says, “every body hates him he’s mean very rude fast to judge” (175).It creates conflict because Patton attacked Dashial because Patton was mad with Roddy so he thought that Dashial had something to do with it so he attacked Dashial which resulted in Patton getting a beating.Everybody hates Patton because this stuff is what he does to not get bored.

MINOR: A minor character in this story is Kira. In the story, Kira is Dashall’s friend and she helps with the plot. She was there when they were geting chased by Patton and she was mad and fighting back. Dashall kinda likes her and she is a big part of the book.

SETTING: The setting of my story is at a moon base. A specific scene happens when they find Nina's hidden storage place where they find a lot of moon rocks and they don't know if she is smuggling them or if Nina is giving her orders. This setting is important because it makes it harder to find someone on the moon.

SUMMARY Rafe and his friend that is a girl keeps tutoring him and he finised 6 grade and he and his family live a happy life.

INCITING INCIDENT: The story begins to change when the first day of 6 grade. The text says, “ Rafe got attacked by miller one day and from there on miller keeps attckeing and bullie rafe” (217-218 #)., This causes rafe two experens bullying and he was mad and sad and that really changed rafes life and from there on rafe kept getting bullied by miller.

Out of the 7 Archetypes I would pick OVERCOMING THE MONSTER: Rafe has a bully and he hates his teachers and his dad, and he has an operation but he has stopped the operation to please his mom. The bully and the teachers and the dad are like monsters and they make Rafe's life miserable and fills like he wants to eliminates the threats but really he would never do that because he is Rafe.

SUMMARY: Rafe is always causing trouble because he has an operation and this operation causes Rafe to break rules and get in to trouble. Rafe has a friend named Leo who assigned Rafe a mission to accumulate a million points before the end of the school year. The way Rafe earns points is by breaking rules. One example of Rafe breaking the rules is when he runs in the hallway with only underwear for 30,000 points.

(2/2) VISUALIZATION: It made me feel that this kid rafe was going to get into trouble anway because this was the worst scenario that he could have been in and right there i knew that he was going to get in to bad trouble.

(1/2) VISUALIZATION: I could picture Rafe getting in troble because he got detention. The text says, “ mom said, standing up between us. Rafe, you’re grounded unti further notice.” (pg 96). This helped me Visualiz because rafe got in detention and now his mom is talking to him about it and well i know in this situations that kids allway get in to trouble.

CONNECTIONS Part 2: This teen days are bad because this kid is having to get bullied from time to time and the teacher aren’t nice they are very harsh on rafe and on his friend and in the book he just got detention.

CONNECTIONS: This story reminds me of bad teen days. This book is about a kid that has to face challenges and those challenges is what makes his life in middle school bad. This matters because this kid is having to face problem from kids in middle and middle school stuff but also house issues and there is a friend of rafes and this ties in to the book.

CHARACTERIZATION: This character seems scared and timid . The text says, “that this kid is getting bullied, he is mad and annoyed and hates middles school” (40). This proves that this kid is not having the best time at school and he has parent issues. He is scared and timid because he has to know that every day he will be bullied and will have to yell at his parents and he is scared to do so.

ANTAGONIST: The antagonist of my book is Fudge, Peter's little brother. When peter wants nothing bad to happen at the shoe store fudge throws a tantrum and breaks everything and makes peter very embarrassed. The book is mainly on fudge and the relationship between them stays the same. Fudge is mischievous and .He does bad things on purpose.

SETTING: So far, Pete is a static character because doesn’t chenge his mind about Fudge. In the story it says, “I turned into a raving lunatic. No, even worse – I turned into my brother” (139 ). This reveals Pete thinks that his brother is still immature and has bad manors so Pete hasn’t changed his mind about Fudge.

The conflict in my story is character vs. character because Pete wants to escape his brother, Fudge, and all the trouble he gets in. In the story it says, “Fudge destroyed the shoe store because he got mad with people and pete left and wished that his friends or any one he knew wasn’t there" (14). This conflict shows that pete is running away from his brother.

PREDICTION: I predict that Fudge will get into trouble while visiting his cousins. In the story it says, “Fudge always laugh when visiting his cousins.” (Blume, 81). This prediction makes sense because Fudge likes the attention even though he knows his in trouble.

P.O.V Is the first person. Pete is telling the story we see this in the book he's telling us what he sees.An example would be I now know this tortis is an Teo addict.

The Protaginost in the story is Fudge. Fudges mom said that Fudge is obsessed with money he even is drawing dollar signs on a cheerio boxes Fudges mom is scared that this obsession is dangers. Why I chose Fudge as my Protaginist because he is a blabber mouth, he always gets in to trouble, Also he's calm about things that his brother isn't

The protaginst is Pete and fudge. Fudge makes a lot of chit chat and is obsessed with money. Pete is another protaginst because he informs use stuff that is going on. Pete and Fudge are the protaginst because they both creat a lot of conmonshion

the setting takes place in the apartment. We get introduce to fudge and Pete, fudge is obsessed with money and Pete doesn't like that fudge his brother is obsessed with money. Pete is thinking fudge won't make any friends and he thinks that he mite get bullied so he is scared.

GENRE: This book is fiction Pete and Fudge are moving to a new home and Pete doesn't like that they are moving and fudge is really obsessed with money and they are trying to figure out what mixed group is.

fudge is going crazy about money and he is trying to make fudge bucks. Pete is Fugdes big brother and gets blamed for Fudges mistakes. They also have a little sister named Toosie . Fudge is having a fit and distroying a sheo store.