VISUALIZE: On page 10 of "ghost" when castles dad came in and tried to harm him and his mom. I could envision a fat middle aged man with blood shot eyes. With a tiny pistol, Missing shots trying to get the mom. I could vision broken glass on the floor, the smell of alcohol, and feeling so motionless that even I feel dizzy from reading this part of the story.
— Dec 15, 2025 11:18AM
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