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dante my goat i love you world first self-insert fanfic writer

this book is DENSE. it's been a while since i truly challenged myself both in terms of prose and writing style and the intelectual content that i consume. this is a fun book and a genuinely good one

I have a FAT bone to pick with this author.

apparently i finished the book?? oops

oh my gosh mongo i love you

i fear the hype is fully warranted. its stupid, its fun, theres a talking cat, the AI has a foot fetish, its just stupid. i love it

This is going to be a LONG review once I finish this book.

these charactres don't read as "people", i think that's the problem. they way the both act and talk is completely unnatural. theres also constance comparisns between the women that scream "written by a man" even though it wasnt. theres always comparisons like "I noted the relative flatness of everyones stomach and found that while Sarah ahd the most toned abs i was a sure ocntender for the shapliest hips." like ???

i hate to pass early judgement but if i'm being deathly honest i smell a dnf coming up. the sentence structure is clunky, the mc seems more pick-me robot than an actual person, and the whole story reads as a hastily done writing promt than a full on story. hope it gets better, i loved the idea

dnf too overly freaked out

holy PEAK

i will in fact be emotionally unstable for the next month xx

HELLO???? i'm sorry you cant just casually drop that mid-chapter like it's just "she went to class" SOMEBODY DIED???

perhaps its plain writing but this SCREAMS ai generated to me idk

dnf 60%, absolutely abhorrable novel

this is an ai-generated book. there is no way a human being is capable of writing this poorly. i've read wattpad one direction fanfiction written by a 9 year old better than this.

WHAT. WHAT.

YOOOOO

ughhh unreliable narrators ml

ohmigosh i didn't even realise i was so far in. i will in face be traumatised by the book. good news though, I can taste a five star review coming up!

physically inabme of putting this down