Literally, only eight pages in but wtf is going on with the formatting/writing of this book? Switching from first person to third person, random info dumps that break up narration, and already it’s so repetitive? We should not be using the same adjective in back-to-back sentences or reminding me of the king and who he is and his name when you literally just told me a paragraph ago. Yikes 😭
— Aug 28, 2026 11:49PM
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