This is such a dense piece of work. There is so much narration going on. It also doesn’t follow one character but multiple. I don’t have a problem with that but It sometimes isn’t a smooth transition from one character to another and it leaves the reader a bit lost and confused. I do find it entertaining but I would prefer if some of the narration were to be cut out of the story.
— Jul 24, 2026 12:45AM
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