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I’m having a difficult time with this book for two reasons one I do actually find the story in itself to be interesting. However, I do think that the language and the way that it is written is not to my liking. I think my concern is that the story is really good and it’s having these really good parts but some of the dialogue just for me false flat

I think it’s honestly me because this book is actually quite well written and an interesting premise. There is a bit of change in terms of setting, which is kind of jarring, but I’m going to give it the benefit of the doubt and just say that I think that it will work itself out. There’s also a lot of jargon that hasn’t really lended itself any particular explanations quite yet.

I’m truly enjoying reading this book as the current times were in and the current times I am personally in. But I am also really in love with the way that the author describes Hope and I would not say that it is something that I have forgot. I would say that it is something that I have not been able to properly put into words on my own, but it has always been my philosophy that Hope is not a guarantee. It is work.

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