okay i like the premise but dear god this intro and first chapter are rough. the word choices and how the points are being conveyed is just plain corny and honest to god remind me of my freshman year roommate, which means virtually nothing to most people seeing this but is the best way i could possibly describe it. gonna keep listening and hope it gets better. it feels like nonfic simplified for The Girlies (tm)
— Jun 03, 2026 03:30PM
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