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Soooo many typos

Chapter 13 made me cringe so bad it felt like rage bait and the ENDING like omg what a fucking useless power

I keep getting these little sections were I’m like okay this is good this is interesting and then the characters will do something dumb or unbelievable and it just pulls me right out of it!!! Some of the plot choices just don’t make sense logically at all

Every decision these people make is so frustratingly illogical, like the conclusions they jump to are INSANE

This is so confusing. Why is her power shape shifting fabric and sand and her sister literally has fire powers. That is so useless. Also there are so many grammatical errors. The story is okay so far other than everything being named in really confusing ways and there being both not enough exposition and yet way too much