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UGH, I'm getting really tired of this love square thing and all the jealousy and hate. It's kind of ruining the book a bit for me. I'm sure there's probably a reason for it that I'll find out about later in the story but I just don't like the relationships between the characters right now.

But he didn't have a wand, she broke it, how can he cast spells then?

It's starting to annoy me that every time the word "woman" appears it's written like "women", it's so confusing and distracting.

ALL THE DRAMA.

A glossary of terms! That is so useful!

A bit unrealistic and weird that evolution went so far in just 60 years, but hey! It's fiction and there's dragons so it's clearly not supposed to de a realistic book, I guess.

The information about roads and locations is also very factual, not actually descriptive and not subjective, which makes it kind of boring eventually.

I'm enjoying the story but there's too many unnecessary descriptions of roads and locations for my taste. They make the text seem quite dense and some of them are not relevant to the plot.

La historia en sí parece interesante, aunque la forma en la que está escrita el libro no es la mejor... Algunas frases del narrador tienen verbos en presente y en pasado, aunque los hechos que cuenta estén ocurriendo al mismo tiempo. Además, que el libro esté escrito en Español de Guatemala hace que me sea un poco difícil entender algunas cosas y que me suenen raro algunas frases y expresiones