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“Gary is tall and lean, like a tan little peanut”

The character description in this book is…questionable, but this own is downright atrocious. There are paragraphs dedicated to describing what a character looks like but very little given to their personality or motivations.

The writing is a little choppy for me so far, and very dialogue heavy. I also think the frequent jumping between character POVs, and introducing so many characters in the beginning detracted from the flow. Overall, standard story so far, but with enough mystery for me to want to get answers.