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It’s a bit slow so far and the plot seems to be all over the place. I feel like I’m getting info overload without it really pertaining to the story.

The friendships between Elliot/Jackson and Gerard/Oliver seem off a little bit, there are definitely scenes where it comes off as more intimate and less friendly.

Everyone is a little annoying with the coddling and pushing of Sawyer and Ashes relationship. The hate and and like, push and pull between them seems inconsistent as well. One minute they hate each other and then they're flirting. Sawyer will go on a rant on how much he hates ash and in the next sentence hes completely over it. Definitely frustrating