Trying WAY too hard for ambiance, and I understand most southern-isms, but many of these don’t even make any sense. “The town’s breath, somewhere below the hill, finally came out of the chest it had been holding.” The chest was being held by the breath? That… switch that. That doesn’t make sense. So far there has been multiple instances of the MMC being “giants” and then says they’re 6’3”. That’s just a guy.
— Jun 02, 2026 12:30PM
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