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Interesting premise so far. Warming to the characters, the science, the environment — unsure the time period. Enjoyable so far.

Wow! But honestly, I don’t need to ready any further.

Okay. Things are picking up!

The conclusion of the chapter felt, for the first time, like a really cliffhanger befitting a mystery.

I hope things pick up from here.

So good!

Better than Inception

This story somehow dismisses the boundary between repetition and crescendo, compelling interest as its depth and awareness expands one’s capacity to Jason’s desperation. It’s both otherworldly and familiarly human, and I don’t know how it will all end. Enjoying the read with anticipation.

Tactful and restrained, which I like! These last few chapters marked with hidden gems of wisdom and concluding with real propulsion to the forthcoming scenes. Enjoyable as the end draws near and the action rises, though with the gentleness typical of Catwood Pond.

Life has forged voraciously forward over the last month, with opportunity to turn a page or two in this delightful story often escaping me. But ironically, as Cricket and her father’s lives have picked up over the last several chapters, I find myself settling in life and enthralled in this delightful tale. Oh, and great writing!

Gentle in its unfolding, already evoking such empathy and resonance.

The last two sentences that conclude chapter one pack the whole story in two lines, but in a way that entices one forward.

Most enjoyable section of reading so far.