I have not had the will to finish this book.
I find the characters a little two dimensional and the narrative over-encumbered with unnecessary description. There's a plethora of poor grammar. e.g. on pg 39: "The brambles scratched sharp at her legs."
Is it supposed to be: "The brambles scratched sharply at her legs." or "The brambles scratched, sharp at her legs."?
A disappointment
— Jun 15, 2013 01:44AM
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