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Not completing this. Too much like another series i recently read.

I loved how well VIvien describes and sets up her settings. Kept me on my toes and didn't want to stop reading. Jack is so focused and finds a way to connect this situation to the possible discovery of more clues to finding Susan. There were some spellings errors but otherwise the editing almost had it perfect. Can't wait for the next stop for Jack. I recommend this and the previous in this series.