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" I just fucked my landlord for free rent."

Yeappp. I'm not here. 💀

Trying real hard to complete this boring mess.🥲

This is PAINFULLY boring. Trying hard to be a classic style romantasy...but failing at it. Hopefully the "seduction" would give me something

The repeated use of the words "fuck, fucking, goddamn" is just TOOO MUCH. It broke my brain. 🫥🫥🫥

This is too fking OTT!! 💀 And i just can't get past the ai polishing

"I let out a slow breath. My mouth tastes like cotton and regret."

Cotton and regret!?! You literally ate lasagna dude. Cotton what??!?

Hell nahh. This is definitely AI !!

"Ria is the kind of woman you never see coming until it's too late. Dressed in pastels, wrapped in sugar and honey, all bright smiles and sweet laughter.
But underneath? A predator. A nightmare in pink lipstick."

is this ai writing !??! 💀💀

"I will never belong to them again. I'm only loyal to myself now."

Let's goooo. The reviews already had me pumped up for a strong FMC (unfortunately a rarity in a grovel romance)

When a side character/club member who considered the FMC as his friend has more humanity for the FMC than the man (the MMC) who claims to still feel for her even after the "betrayal".

How typical. How do I believe he feels for her when he's behaving like this 💀

"You don't belong here. Too beautiful for this place," he continues, studying my face like he's searching for a lie. He brings his face closer and whispers, as if to himself "But I really want to taste you."

??! Got me wheezing...like SIR YOU JUST MET HER!!! 🤣

Already liking the MMC. He's veryyy different from other HR MMCs.
For now....

"At the wall, I almost collapsed in relief—and from physical exertion—
when I saw the top of a ladder peeking up from the other side before Ryan’s
full head of blond hair popped into sight."

So a big mafia mmc's huge home/property doesn't have an electrified fence or constant cctv monitoring!???!?😹😹😹

I give up. This could have been soo good if it wasn't for the FMC's 1st person pov that was torturous to read.

3rd person pov could have been better for this book.

Everything was just soo weird and the banter between them was damn pretentious and just too forced as if I'm watching some badly made 2000s romcom. Only this premise didn't need that.
Everything was just grating on my nerves.

"But whether she was sorceress or queen or goddess, it hardly mattered.
Either way, he’d worship forever at her cunt."

And he's a virgin. A hardened army general/prince as well.
I've been Served 🥳🤌🏻

"I doubted we’d seen the last of his brother and whoever hired him to kill
the DBG buyout, but we’d deal with that later. For now, I chose to soak in
our triumph over the first real, concrete obstacle of our new relationship."

I understand alé wanted him to come to her store opening as a test to check his promises. But GIRLLL he almost died.... atleast don't make it about you thinking he won't come

“Fuck me like you mean that, Dom.”

✨Alessandra all-horny-no-self-respect Ferreira✨

The guy she went on an official date with turned out to be a piece of shitee.
Ohh Who would have thought 😹

Ana huang is putting the divorced FMC in every position possible that shows her to be a figure who needs saving or who needs to be pitied.... in front of the MMC.

"I know what you gave up to be in Brazil"

And what EXACTLY is that Alé?? A few deals? He had a damn team to handle everything. It was just two weeks off. And he was doing everything online as well.

No hate to anyone who sells pressed flowers but why do these authors give women such unserious less profitable businesses. That even readers can't take it seriously. I'm sorry. 😶‍🌫️

"I’d spent my life building an empire, but in that moment, I would’ve
happily dismantled the entire fucking thing if it meant making her smile
instead of cry."

All words.
Atleast Alex gave up his company if I remember correctly. And i thought his grovel was bad.
But here comes Dom.

"I’d spent my life building an empire, but in that moment, I would’ve
happily dismantled the entire fucking thing if it meant making her smile
instead of cry."

all words..less actions.
At least Alex gave up his company and i thought his grovel was bad.
Here comes Dom.

Can this man let her breathe😒

"How had I ever willingly spent so many hours away from her when I
would give up my fucking kidney for a moment alone with her again? "

But will you give up your company!!? 😗

Yeh inki hawas ka kya karu bhai 😹😹

Poor Ale 🤧

Re-starting this to pass this slump 😶‍🌫️

Why did they suddenly do primal play. !?! There's no saving their lack of chemistry.

"Happy families with her in her cute little yellow house? Nah. That ain’t happening. I’m leaving. Besides, I’m not a family man.
She doesn’t want a baby daddy anyway."

Stop pushing the boundaries with her then you fcker. Both the MCs are testing my patience
This is sex. Pure, filthy sex. "

"She thinks what we’re doing, what we’ve got is not real? "

You fatherfckerrr. Your ass is leaving in less than two weeks bro.
Why tf you sad over this. You got no right.

“You make me feel…wild, Katarina. Like a fuckin’ beast.
You make me want to…” He shakes his head, like he can’t actually believe
what he’s saying. “I want to take you down. Hunt you. I want to bite you,
claim you. I don’t know. It’s not a thing I’ve done or felt before, but it’s
like…”

She has no personality bro. Where's this much attraction towards her coming from!?