Many inconsistencies! Ember goes to Nashville because no one there knows her. (her best friend lives there) She's been working as a model. (she's only 5'4") She doesn't care how she looks. (she makes sure to wear cute outfits to workout with makeup) The book needs an editor! Missing words, wrong tenses and extra words could have been avoided. And the run on sentences are extremely annoying!
— Nov 28, 2014 03:50AM
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