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Meh…

Second half better than the first half, but still, wish the author did some research.

Tortured and raped for weeks, running through the woods, breaking down, throwing up, collapsing from exhaustion for five days.

“Sure, let’s have sex.” I get it’s a smut but COME ON.

Also, developing Stockholm syndrome for Kraven after a few days is fucking wild. 🙄

Ok ok by the third guy raping her she finally reacts like a normal person. I guess this one isn’t hot or chiseled enough. In fact, he isn’t, because he’s described as unattractive. Remember folks, rape is okay as long as he’s hot… I guess. 💀🙄

Fucking hate this trope, yet here I am, still reading. The violence at least keeps me entertained.

Smut doesn’t have to have such shallow characters.

We gotta stop guys. She’s being violently raped yet in the moment she’s thinking about how hot her rapist is, and of course she cums thrice. Then, by the gods, she doesn’t have a gag reflex.

I want to say this is written by a man, but worse, it’s written by a woman who only reads shit written by men (or by other woman subject to the same shit). It’s so cringe I want to throw up.

Okay. I pray we are over the near-death-experience-but-too-horny-to-care shit. Also, the forced chemistry between the two characters is agonizing. They’ve known each other a week and bro lowkey in love and it’s just nauseating.

Well, I hope they finally give her real fear. Please don’t make her some defiant attitude line they do in YA novels. Please…

Ugh, it’s so cringe. Kaelin, in the middle of the wilderness, blood loss, adrenalin fading, stuck with a confessed dangerous man.

“Up close his presence is dominating and aggressive and damn my body for liking it.”

Why do people write like this?! Like smut doesn’t have to be so FUCKING STUPID

I feel like I’m going to struggle, but I will carry on… for now.

“Go to sleep, Angel.”

I’m emotional because I’ve been chasing this feeling since I discovered Dennis Cooper. I finally found it again, and I know I’ll lose it again, but that’s okay.

I’m sleep deprived, and I picked up this monstrosity to put me to sleep. I think I zoned out a few times, on the verge of unconsciousness, but I simply can’t shut my eyes because I’m so transfixed.

DR STEPHANS IS DR PHILLIPS AGAIN WHAT

AND SUDDENLY DR STEPHENS IS DR PHILLIPS AGAIN?!

Failing to connect with any of the character. Jimmy goes through hell and he has almost no emotional turmoil… he just suddenly becomes Liam Neison. There’s no backstory on why Albert is so keen to help Jimmy aside from a typical “I knew your father” and somehow found the kid but was entirely unwilling to help said kid until his attempted murder. And who tf is Benny?

Typos (punctuation missing at the end of a paragraph, quotation mark missing, comma instead of a period, ‘too’ instead of ‘to’, ‘gone’ instead of ‘go’.)

Dr Phillips suddenly becomes Dr Stephens…