Still enjoying it but as I progress I wish that the language in it was better. Then, to bounce off that I think it’s perfect because it’s meant to be a teen writing to who knows what and this is how he’s saying it. This is how he’s feeling it, from his day to day Charlie isn’t going to use crazy words or comparisons, he’s gonna say what feels right to him. Idk I thought that was important to comment on!
— Aug 28, 2026 08:27PM
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