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Dawn
Dawn is on page 90 of 320 of The Bookshop of the Broken Hearted
Does this author hate dogs? I could do without the descriptions of shooting dogs and reveling in their agony - feral dog or not! And I don't care if it was "the mindset of the time" - for a book that is supposedly about healing, these scenes inflict distress on the reader!
Jan 09, 2026 01:03PM Add a comment
The Bookshop of the Broken Hearted

Dawn
Dawn is on page 80 of 320 of The Bookshop of the Broken Hearted
MMC has the personality of a wet blanket. There's nothing about him to love. He's written as if he is supposed to be dim-witted.

FMC is too over the top.

I don't think this author has ever written a book with a real relationship in it, because there is 0 chemistry between these two. They go from strangers to "lovers for two weeks" in a page and a half.
Jan 09, 2026 12:09PM Add a comment
The Bookshop of the Broken Hearted

Dawn
Dawn is on page 30 of 370 of Extinction (Cash & Colcord #1)
There is no such thing as a redbone bloodhound. It's either a redbone COONHOUND or a bloodhound. For a tracking dog, probably a bloodhound.
Sep 27, 2025 09:36AM Add a comment
Extinction (Cash & Colcord #1)

Dawn
Dawn is on page 28 of 370 of Extinction (Cash & Colcord #1)
So far, three mentions of Jurassic Park. Also, I hate when male authors try to write women: of course she sleeps nude. Of course she stops to notices her wrinkles and put on lipstick on her way to a murder. Because... Woman. 🙄
Sep 27, 2025 09:22AM Add a comment
Extinction (Cash & Colcord #1)

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