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So, I've enjoyed the Neighbours from hell series. Started reading Pretend. At first, the interrupted sentences were cute, but then it got olllldddd very fast. The story is taking quite a while to heat you. At 41% in, I want to take a brick and hit the hero and heroine for them to get a clue.

You walk into an office, see someone reaming an employee, pretty much telling them they're fired and to cleat our their things....wouldn't you assume this individual has the power to fire persons thereby putting them at the managerial level or CEO level?

From the blurb, it seemed like a comedic read based on the plot which is highly unrealistic. First impressions a quarter way in, not really feeling the characters. Hero's speech based on his background should be a bit more refined.
Book also needed better editing

Mason's Match
slight grammatical errors. Dialogue could be a little bit better.

Needed better editing.
Beau Williams - no-good coward. Grow some balls man! Stand up for yourself, you're an adult, you're responsible for your actions and your life.

Needed better editing

Just started reading. It's ok so far but I haven't been pulled into the story as I've been with her Captured by Love series.