(I was sent a pdf copy for an honest review). I want to start by saying I enjoy fantasy, and I really liked the premise… but sadly the execution needed significant work. The writing style involved a lot of tell rather than show and unnecessarily obvious/cliched dialogue. Unfortunately, even though the concept seemed interesting, the immaturity of a few main characters and the prose meant I couldn’t finish.
— Nov 27, 2022 09:09PM
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