So far, I'm disappointed. The writing is OK, and the storytelling isn't horrible, but the details are a bit off. Perhaps the author will explain why the late-20s protagonist's (biological) mother's identical twin was considered "elederly" or why the protagonist was content being an admin. assistant at an advertising firm in Tallahassee after grad school. Student debt isn't a thing? Maybe. But nothing's explained yet.
— Jul 20, 2018 12:11PM
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