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A little turgid and more focussed on the politics of the various positions within the command structure than the various military engagements. But enough on fleet dispositions and so on to get a sense of the campaign in the Baltic. Does get interesting with the uprisings at Kronstadt and so on, however, as he has little time for the revolutionaries; seeing them mostly as an unruly, incompetent mob of opportunists a

Enjoying sarcastic tone.

Misses the mark with the tone. Comes across as immature and self-interested trying to impress Grandpa by being so goofy.