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There’s a lot that I liked, but for whatever reason I didn’t really connect with parts 5 and 6. I don’t agree with people who say that not enough stuff happened which is a review I’ve read in other places. Plenty happens, even before those final two sections. But I found my attention drifting and fighting to finish. Not a great review on my part I’ll admit.

Great

Didn’t finish. It’s not great. Pretty meandering with no real connecting thread between multiple stories. At times it seems like critical information is missing because the writer wants the story to be more like a riddle for the reader. I don’t need a novel to be nailed to a plot but I do think it has to be about something. I don’t know what this is